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02 June 2008 @ 01:55 pm
Har far to the point of no return. Chapter 16  
Title: How far to the point of no return. Chapter 16
Rating: NC-17 (some chapters)
Author: [info]jensen_is_love and [info]alethea293
Pairing: Jensen/Jared, Slight Chad/Jared and Kenzie/Tom
Summary:
As captain of the college swim-team your life couldn't be too difficult, right? But what happens when your father forces you to live with his new lover and her kids to "grow into a family" But no one could have warned him about his new "brother" Jared, The geek of the junior year and reporter of the school newspaper, who is the exact opposite. But on the other hand opposites can attract.
Wordcount: 3,809
Warnings: blowjob, handjob, het kissing?
A/N: Jensen (23), Jared (21), Mackenzie (18).- Beta'd by the amazing [info]josiepops
and [info]candygramme



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                                                           Chapter 16




Kenzie woke up the next morning before the sun had even started to rise. There was an arm draped around her waist, holding her close to a broad chest. Hot breath against her neck. She slowly opened her eyes and looked down at her body, dress still in place. Tom was lying behind her. Her eyes fell on the present Jensen had given her last night, and she opened it carefully.

There was a sleepy grunt from Tom's direction as his arm tightened around her, pulling her closer, opening his eyes slowly. "Hey."

"Hey you." She whispered, turning to give him a small kiss. When she opened the box tears hit her as she saw that Jen had picked out their Gran's favourite pieces and given them to her.

"Look what he gave me. So beautiful!" She said and showed the jewellery to Tom.

"Wow, they're pretty. They'll look amazing on you." Tom smiled softly, his nose gently nudging her shoulder as he looked over it at the jewellery box.

"I gotta go to Jen and thank him, I was a bit occupied with kissing you to thank him properly." Kenzie muttered and blushed. Why was she so shy around Tom all of a sudden? She kissed him again and peeled herself from his embrace. "Be right back!" With that she left the room and bounced over to Jensen's room. Which was empty. Great, so over to Jared's.

In the semi-darkness of the room she saw nothing but sheets and a toe peeking out. Jensen was ticklish as hell and hated to be woken like this, but she wanted to learn some new curse-words anyway, so she started tickling. But there was no reaction.

There was a groan and a slightly annoyed noise before the foot was pulled back under the covers, Jared poked his head over the sheets, glaring. "What?!" He was tired, and he had a bitch of a hangover.

Kenzie blushed deep-red and almost stormed out of the room, but she had faced a grumpy Jared before, so this wouldn't stop her. "If Jen is somewhere under there, please send him up, I wanna hug him."

"There had better be a fire, Kenzie or so help me god.." Jared grumbled, voice only half threatening, the other half sleepy. He disappeared back under the sheets, kissing Jensen's lips softly, "Jen?"

Jensen unconsciously kissed back, wrapping a hand around Jared's cock. "S'early... don'wanna get up. Wan' stay in bed with you." He muttered and began stroking Jared gently.

Biting his lower lip to keep the moan back, Jared gently caught Jensen's wrist, kissing him one last time, just a chaste kiss. "Jen, in a minute. Not right now." He moaned, hoping Kenzie wouldn't hear, "Kenzie wants to thank you for something, I'm guessing her gift." Great, now he was hard. With his step-sister in the room!

"Huh? Kenzie's here? Why didn't you say earlier?" Jensen was wide awake within seconds. Great, one of those awkward situations where you wish you were an only child. He pulled the covers back and squinted at Kenzie, taking care that their bodies were covered from the waist down. "Hey... what's up?" he managed to get out, before he was thrown back into the pillows, feeling tears wetting his shoulder.

"Thank you so much... it's just so fantastic! I love you!" she whispered and kissed his cheek. Sitting on the edge of the bed, she watched them carefully. "So what were you two up to last night?"

Jared blushed deeply, turning his face into Jensen's neck, hiding it from view. This was so embarrassing. "I swear, you and my mom are evil. What were you and Tom doing last night?" He smirked, emphasising Tom's name.

Kenzie leaned over and punched his arm. "Nothing. We fell asleep talking on my bed. So there's nothing to worry about. Sherri complained that there was no hot water left... so what took you two so long?" She wiggled her eye-brows at Jared.

Jensen just groaned and rolled his eyes. "You're really evil... now get out. It's not even six! Oh, hey Tom." He grinned. It must be quite the sight, two naked guys and a completely dressed girl cuddling.

If the guys were anyone but Jared and Jensen, Tom would probably have been jealous. He came over, sitting beside Kenzie, "Hey, guys. Good night?" He asked, knowingly.

"Would you people stop asking that? We didn't have sex, we just.. I should really stop talking now." Jared groaned, turning his face back into Jensen's neck, embarrassed. He pressed a few gentle kisses there.

"Nope, they won't." Jensen said and turned to lie on his side, his hand running over Jared's bare stomach. He grinned into his chest when he heard Kenzie gasp at the bruises on his shoulders and neck.

Kenzie cleared her throat and got up, pulling Tom along with her. "We had better leave them alone!"

"Holy shit! Jared's a biter?!" Tom exclaimed, eyes wide as he stared at the purpling marks. "Whoa!"

"Oh god.." Jared groaned, putting his hands over his face.

Kenzie looked at Tom in fake surprise. "How do know this kind of stuff? I didn't take you for the expert on kinks!" She said and closed the door behind them. "At least you managed to turn Jared beet-red before six... you'll have fun in swim-practice tomorrow." She laughed, teasing him "Now back to bed!" She grinned.
   
                       
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Jensen sighed when they were finally alone again. "You can change back to your normal skin-tone now, they're gone. So, were did I stop before you told me Kenzie was here?" he asked and licked the nape of Jared's neck, his hand slipping under the cover and starting to stroke him slowly.

At the first touch of Jensen's hand back on his cock, Jared whimpered, licking his lips.  "Jen..." He moaned.

"What? Should I stop?" Jensen asked and smirked, adding a little more pressure as he began to scrape his teeth over one of Jared's nipples. "You like it too much to make me stop, right?"

The actions compared with the words, forced a low "Oooooh!" out of Jared, his hands clutching at Jensen, managing to grab his head, dragging him up for a hard kiss.

He moaned into Jared's mouth, speeding up his movements, grinding against Jared's thigh. With his free hand he pulled Jared closer to him. "You're wonderful, you know that?" He whispered, this was as close he could get to saying 'I love you'.

Jared blushed a little, biting his lower lip as he looked into his eyes. "I know I'm not meant to say it but.. I love you, Jen." He breathed, shifting his thigh a little to accommodate Jensen's grinding. He deepened the kiss, hands coming up to cup Jensen's face.

Jensen pushed himself down so that he was laying between Jared's spread legs and gripped Jared's ass before licking the head of his cock, teasingly. From time to time he would suck and nibble ever so gently, interrupting by placing kisses over Jared's stomach and thighs.

"Please, Jen… don't tease." Jared breathed, back arching as Jensen pressed an open-mouthed kiss to the head of his cock. "Ooooh!"

"Easy... you'll come soon. This will have to last you the whole day." Jensen whispered and took Jared's cock inside the tight heat, humming and teasing the slit with his tongue. He moaned when Jared put a hand on the back of his neck and gripped his hair.

It took a lot for Jared not to just grab Jensen's head and thrust into the willing mouth. But he respected and loved Jensen. He wouldn't do that but he sure did want to mark him up some more. He gently ran his hands through Jensen's hair, gripping.

Jensen could feel the twitch in Jared's muscles, his lover was so close already. He took him in completely, gentle hands running over his thighs, knowing he was pushing him over the edge.

"J-Jen, M'gonna- Jen!" Jared managed to get out before he was coming down Jensen's throat, gripping Jensen's hair tighter, moaning his name.

Jensen worked him through his orgasm, swallowing it all. He wiped his lips with the back of his hand and lay down beside Jared again, kissing him softly. "Was I any good?"

"Amazing." Jared panted, out of breath from his orgasm. He'd never come so hard in his life. "Want me to..?" He motioned to Jensen's crotch, which was hidden by the thin sheet.

"It's a bit late for that..." Jensen muttered and blushed. "When you gripped my head... it was over for me." He pulled the cover over his head and snuggled closer to Jared.

Jared chuckled, a hand coming to rest on Jensen's hip. "The popular, sex-god, Jensen Ackles, came from just that?" He teased, kissing his hair.

"Hey, I never claimed that title... and so I have one weakness... sorry!" Jensen answered, pretending to be shocked. "You being a moaning mess wasn't helping either!"

"So me moaning turns you on, huh, Jen?" Jared laughed, leaning down to suck on Jensen's earlobe, his hand tightening on Jensen's hip.

"Nah, you're a mess when I make you fall apart... there's absolutely nothing sexy about it." He answered, grinning as he ran his fingers over Jared's spine, making him shudder. "Except when you twitch like this, your eyes flutter, and your hand on my head, but you're hotter when you're screaming my name." He whispered and licked over his Adams apple.

"Jen.." Jared whined, his cock twitching in attention. "You're such a tease." He pouted, trying not to grin.

"Believe me, I know." Jensen muttered and kissed Jared's jaw. "Let's get some more sleep before life wants us back."

"Mmhmm." Jared mumbled, already half asleep himself. He moved closed to the heat radiating from Jensen's body, sighing peacefully..


   
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Kenzie and Sherri were already up making breakfast when they heard Jared and Jensen running down the stairs. Sherri usually made pancakes on Sundays and Jared had described their fluffiness in enormous detail to Jensen in bed, which was why they were currently racing down the stairs to get their share. Jensen tried to push past Jared, fully aware of how much food the guy could stomach.

Sherri smiled at them when they practically fell through the door. "You two have a good night and shower?"

Blushing, Jared nodded, "Yeah, mom." He grabbed Jensen, poking him in the ribs gently, he knew how ticklish the other man was. Sitting down at the large oak table, he watched as his mom put piles of pancakes onto plates.

Jensen leaned over and kissed Sherri on the cheek. "If they taste half as good as they look I'll get you a medal for being the new breakfast goddess!" He grabbed the bottle of maple syrup and covered his stack with the sticky liquid. What he would give to be alone with Jared and the bottle right now. He quickly snapped out of his thoughts and got up to get the coffee-pot. He leaned against Jared when he felt his boyfriend hug him from behind and kiss his neck.

Jared nibbled lightly on Jensen's neck, sucking another purple mark into his skin before letting him go, grabbing the syrup to coat his own pancakes, then handed the bottle to Kenzie as he went to go sit back down.

"You're just too cute!" Kenzie squealed, smiling at them. She had convinced Tom that it'd be better not to be there for breakfast after they had already spent the night together.

Jensen rolled his eyes at his sister and grunted in surprise when Jared pulled him onto his lap. "If you start feeding me... I swear-". He was interrupted when his Dad entered the room. Alan gave Sherri a kiss, along with a quick 'Good morning', when his gaze fell Jensen and Jared and the bruise on his son's neck. It was still wet with spit. "Can anybody tell me what's going on?" He demanded.

"Uh.. well.." Jared began, biting his lower lip. This couldn't end well. "We're.. um.."

"Yeah? I am still waiting!" Alan's glare became harder with each second. Kenzie shifted uncomfortably in her chair. Jensen swallowed audibly and tried to get up, but Jared held him back.

"Jared, please, let me get up?" His voice was desperate.

"No, Jen. Why does he seem to think that we care what he thinks? It isn't his life. He can't control you." Jared frowned, holding him a little tighter. "Yes, Alan. We're together. It shouldn't matter to you. Aren't you just glad that your son is happy? I mean, my Mom's fine with it, why can't you just shut up and deal with it?" He knew he was out of line, but he wasn't going to let Jensen think less of himself because of his father.

"Jared please... just don't, okay?" Jensen gave him another pleading look and struggled himself free, standing in front of his father, who was still taken back by Jared's words.

"Jared, this isn't what I expected from you, but I surely expected it to come from Jensen or Mackenzie. I am disappointed... I mean you're brothers!" Alan was nearly shouting, and he shot Kenzie a 'don't you dare speak' glare.

"What does it matter to you Dad? I'm happy with him... I deserve to be happy! Or are you still holding a grudge against me? Are you still pissed that I tried to get full custody of Kenzie when I was 14? That it had to get that far just to stop you drinking? Or is it because I look so much like Mom?!" Jensen spat at him, breathing heavily.

Alan opened and closed his mouth, thinking of something to say. He gripped the chair tightly and sat down, helping himself to pancakes. "So you knew, Sherri?" He asked calmly.

"Yeah, I knew... I’ve known for a while, when Jared told me about the first guy he'd been with, I knew. Don't you see the way they act around each other? I love you and the things you do for other people, but you should think about your family too." Sherri replied, equally calm as she poured herself another coffee.

Jensen gaped at her and shook his head. "You don't have to stand up for me like this, really, I'll get along." He said and sat down, sighing at the comforting squeeze Jared gave him.

Jared kept his hand on Jensen's thigh, just some sort of contact to let him know that he was there and not about to leave. He knew that his mom always stuck up for what she believed. No matter what. And she knew how much he loved Jensen.

Kenzie looked between the three men of her family. She couldn't quite believe what she had just heard. "You filed for full custody?" She asked and Jensen just nodded. "He doesn't look like Mom, Dad. Not at all, he might have her eyes, but he's not like her... he so much better, he would never leave."

Alan's phone rang, and he answered it quickly. "Gotta go... take care of something!" As he hung up, he was suddenly aware that he spent most of his time helping other people with their messed up lives, but he never took the time to fix his own family. "We'll talk about it later," he said, flushing, and with that he was gone.

"So anybody else who needs some hot chocolate right now?" Kenzie was already up and heating up some milk. The day was getting to her and she had only been awake for an hour.

Jensen sighed and leaned against Jared's shoulder. "Thanks." He muttered and closed his eyes, wishing for the day to be over.

"He'll come around, Jen." Jared whispered, kissing his forehead. "Come on, It's a Sunday.. Let's do something fun, or we could go watch movies in bed all day?" He gently nudged Jensen's nose with his own.

"You think so? Bet he ignores me the rest of the month and gives me that look whenever our paths cross, but movies sound great." He relaxed into Jared's touch.

"Don't let it affect you. You're happy, right? I'm happy.. He'll have to get used to it because there's no way I'm letting you go, again." Jared sighed softly, kissing his lips. He ignored the sudden 'Awww' from his mom.

Kenzie chimed in and they gave them a 'awww' deluxe concert.

Jensen groaned when they started saying things like 'cute' and 'sweet'. "Better get upstairs before they invite the neighbours!"

"They're more the type to tape it." Jared chuckled, groaning when his mom made an 'ooooooooh' sound, "Let's go before we give them any more ideas." Jared laughed, grabbing Jensen's hand and pulling him to the stairs.


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Kenzie was tailing them and pulled Jensen into a hug, trying to put everything she couldn't say (just then) into it. "You're the best, you know that?" She said softly into his ear and tried to blink away the tears.

Jensen looked at her and stroked her shoulder. "You're okay?"

"Of course I am, I'm a big girl now, all grown up and stuff. Can I have your car to go see Tom?"

Jensen's face fell but he smiled and nodded. "Keys are in the pocket of my jacket... but if there's even the slightest dent or scratch on her, I'll kill you!"

Kenzie grinned and went back into the kitchen, laughing at something Sherri said.

He looked up at Jared with teary eyes. "Still think I'm a catch? Messed up family, and getting all teary because of a hug..."

"Even more so." Jared smiled, kissing him softly as he wiped the tears away with his thumb. "Makes me love you even more." He bit his lower lip, hoping that Jensen would be okay that he said it again..

Jensen let out the breath he didn't know he'd been holding and grinned at Jared. "So what's on your mind?"

Jared grinned down at him, moving closer so he could nibble and suck on Jensen's earlobe. "Just thinking about how much I want to blow you, again." He whispered into Jensen's ear.

Jensen swallowed and nearly tripped over the step, falling into Jared's arms. He straightened himself quickly and muttered something about having weak knees from too little breakfast. "Don't do that again or I'll end up in hospital!"

"From too little breakfast, huh?" Jared smirked, kissing and licking the back of Jensen's neck, marking out the next place for him to place a hickey. "Love marking you, Jen."

"They'll think something poked me for the entire weekend, I'll look like a stupid Dalmatian!" He grinned and cupped Jared's cock through his jeans.

"You gonna stand here the whole day? Should I hang up warning signs or will you get a room?" Kenzie asked, when she crossed the hallway to get something from the living room.

"What're they doing now?" Sherri asked from the kitchen.

Jensen couldn't help but laugh out loud at Jared's embarrassment.

"I hate you." Jared muttered to Jensen, no real heat behind it. "I'm about to go give Jensen a blowjob, mom." Jared grinned, suddenly feeling brave and adventurous. "So if you hear any noises.."

There was a shattering sound from the kitchen, and Kenzie shot out of the living-room, arms packed with her presents.

"Jared... I just dropped the mug you made me in fifth grade, and now it's broken!" Sherri yelled and came out of the kitchen, standing beside Kenzie.

Jensen sat down on the stairs, he had to hold on to the wall to keep some balance while he shook with laughter.

"You fucker." Jared muttered to Jensen, nudging him. He dodged the playful whack that Sherri gave him for his language. "What?! It's not like I'm lying.. I am going to give him a blowjob!" He laughed, nodding towards Jensen's obvious hard-on with a smirk when he saw Jensen blush.

"I don't wanna hear any kind of noise coming from your rooms, okay?" Sherri scolded them, but she was already smiling again. She was just glad to see them both happy.

                   
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When they were finally upstairs and safely locked inside Jared's room, Jensen turned to him and asked "She seriously kept the mug from fifth grade?" He managed before he cracked up again.

"Shut up, Mr. Teary-eyed hug!" Jared grinned, pushing Jensen onto the bed before straddling his hips. "Jen?" He asked, serious now.

"What... by the way thanks for telling Sherri what exactly we're doing... she'll never look at you as her innocent son again!" Jensen grinned and squirmed under Jared's touch.

"She knows I'm not as innocent as I look." Jared smiled, biting his lower lip. A key nervous gesture.. "Um, I kinda wanted to ask you something.."

"Shoot, but stop looking so... you're making me nervous too." He said and brushed his thumb over Jared's lower lip.

Jared smiled sheepishly, kissing his thumb gently. "Sorry... I um.. I wanted to talk to you about.. this. I mean, we've.. we've done blowjobs and hand jobs and stuff but not.. y'know, it.."

Jensen stopped smiling and gripped Jared's hand. "You don't think it's a little early?" He was getting nervous now, why would Jared want it? With him? "No Jared you're not ready... you're not ready for it! This a whole new level... you need time to think this through, and I mean really think about it!"

"I don't know.. It's been a while. I don't mean right now. Just.. sometime soon? No pressure." Jared said quietly, looking down at their joined hands. "I just.. I love you so much, and I'm ready, but I can wait.."

Jensen groaned and looked up at him. "Seriously... I don't believe you're ready... how did you imagine it anyway? I haven't bottomed since Chad and I can't imagine that you're planning to bottom... I haven't even touched you there, Jared, I want to give you time until you really want it. I'm the last person in the world to rush you!"

"Jen, stop talking." Jared smiled, silencing him with a gentle kiss. "Sure, I'm a little possessive, and I like to be in control; but either way is good with me. I love you. I just want to do this with you. I want you to be my first." He looked into Jensen's eyes, nuzzling his jaw. "I'm ready. We don't even have to do it right now. We can experiment.. there. Before anything."

"But still... this is big... I just want you be ready and sure about this." He whispered and kissed his hand, flicking his tongue over each fingertip. "Can we just watch some movies?" He asked, trying to get comfortable on Jared's bed.

"Sure. Just promise me you'll think about it? I want to bottom. I want to know what it's like.. What it feels like to have someone you love inside you." Jared whispered, kissing his cheek before grabbing the remote control, turning the TV on.

"Mmhmm, sure." Jensen muttered and leaned against Jared's shoulder. He'd avoid this topic for as long as he could. He laced their fingers together and stared at the TV.

Jared gently squeezed their fingers, bringing his other hand up to play with Jensen's hair. He knew he was pushing it with asking, but he was ready.











Notes:


*Okay, so we were thinking of doing a sequel verse to this when we're done. We'd love to know what you think. :) Thanks!








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unrequited666: ouchie[info]unrequited666 on June 2nd, 2008 01:07 pm (UTC)
"Holy shit! Jared's a biter?!" Tom exclaimed, eyes wide as he stared at the purpling marks. "Whoa!"
haha

What he would give to be alone with Jared and the bottle right now.
What wouldn’t I give? *drools*

"Jared, this isn't what I expected from you, but I surely expected it to come from Jensen or Mackenzie. I am disappointed
How dare he say that about our Jared!

I tried to get full custody of Kenzie when I was 14?
How can that happen? *confused*

"I hate you." Jared muttered to Jensen, no real heat behind it. "I'm about to go give Jensen a blowjob, mom."
hahahaha
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 2nd, 2008 01:14 pm (UTC)
*grins* Jared and the syrup bottle. *drools*

Lol, and as or the custody thing, Jensen's mom left them. (You'll see who for in the sequel. :P) And Jen's dad resolved to drink. So Jensen tried for custody..
(no subject) - [info]unrequited666 on June 2nd, 2008 01:16 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]jensen_is_love on June 2nd, 2008 01:17 pm (UTC)
matija: oh jen[info]ethan_aral on June 2nd, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
omg, at first i was just finally the new chapter ('cause i was so anxious and so needy for more) and now i want to quote entire chapter because it's beyond awesome! *grins*

can't pull my favourite lines because would take all day, but the three of them cuddling on the beginning, and jared not wanting to let go of jen when alan came in and i'm going to give him a blowjob! omg, amazing "job" girls, really!

will read it again!

*dreamy*
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 2nd, 2008 02:17 pm (UTC)
*Snort* Glad you liked it! So, you don't want a sequel, then?
(no subject) - [info]ethan_aral on June 2nd, 2008 02:25 pm (UTC)
shelgrainger2[info]shelgrainger2 on June 2nd, 2008 02:28 pm (UTC)
Oh boy I just loved Jared shouting about to the blowjob to Sherri lol! Alan is still being a prick. I am glad Sherri calmly informed him he needs to look after his family. Poor Jensen admitting about trying to get Kenzie when he was younger. I feel for Jared a bit, he wants to have sex with Jensen but Jensen seems so scared to take that final step. I love the marking up too. I for one would love a sequel. Looking forward to more soon
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 03:06 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! We had so much fun writing this chapter! And we already have some great ideas for the sequel!!!
*hugs and kisses*
josiepops: Screwed[info]josiepops on June 2nd, 2008 02:38 pm (UTC)
awesome chapter as always. loved the playfulness between Jensen and Jared and the fact they feel comfortable in front of Sherri. Alan is a prick who needs to accept his son for who he is and accept that he's happy and settled with Jared. Way to go Jared on the answering back front it made me giggle. as for the blowjob decleration - freaking hilarious.
Totally want to see a sequel as i never want this fic to end! i love it.
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 03:10 pm (UTC)
Awww, thanks so much!!!!
I love writing happy and loving j2... but we'll see what the future brings... *evil grin*
As for the sequel, we already have some ideas for it!
*kisses*
(no subject) - [info]josiepops on June 2nd, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC)
pippii: PippiiPuppy[info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 02:45 pm (UTC)
”"Holy shit! Jared's a biter?!"”
Of cause he is, and it is SO HOT!!!!

”He grabbed the bottle of maple syrup and covered his stack with the sticky liquid. What he would give to be alone with Jared and the bottle right now.”
*Brain meltdown*

”"I hate you." Jared muttered to Jensen, no real heat behind it. "I'm about to go give Jensen a blowjob, mom." Jared grinned, suddenly feeling brave and adventurous. "So if you hear any noises.."
There was a shattering sound from the kitchen, and Kenzie shot out of the living-room, arms packed with her presents.
"Jared... I just dropped the mug you made me in fifth grade, and now it's broken!" Sherri yelled and came out of the kitchen, standing beside Kenzie.”
AHHHHHHHHHHHH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA…………………

Great chapter!!!
SO wonderful, and all the sweet sexing and kissing and everything…..

Just love the boys, and Kenzie and Tom are so cute and Sherri is just wonderful!!!
Hope Alan comes to his senses…

And please YES to a sequel;)
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
Awww thank you so much!!!
*happy that we could make you laugh*
How you're doing hun? Everything okay? *kisses and huggles*
(no subject) - [info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 04:06 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 04:15 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]jensen_is_love on June 2nd, 2008 05:29 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 06:19 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]pippii on June 2nd, 2008 06:29 pm (UTC)
oddie33325[info]oddie33325 on June 2nd, 2008 02:54 pm (UTC)
eeeeeeh!! sequel definitely!!!!! Love this verse!
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Awww, thanks... we'll go and try to write a sequel!!!
no surface, all feeling: J2 - highschool love manip[info]all_feeling on June 2nd, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
thud!!! one great chapter! I love how Sherri and Kenzie are so comfortable with the boys, it's making it easy for them. And I love Jared's new found confidence, he's one possessive and horny lover.

Can't wait for your update. I wonder how will Jensen deal with his past.
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC)
*places pillow under your head* Don't go thud, it will affect your abilty to comment! *grins*
Thanks so much!!!!
Lyca[info]lycaness on June 2nd, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)
Awesome chapter. I love Sheri, she's so cool with how she reacts to everything and especially speaking up against Jensen's dad but at least he listened to her and is starting to realise that he has to change his ways.
It's nice to see that the boys are now thinking of each other and not just themselves anymore, makes them a much nicer couple.
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks!!!
Sherri is actually a lot like my Mum, who is just the best Mum in world, even though she can be really nosy...
We'll update soon!!! *kisses*
like a child dizzy on lemonade.: SPN: Dean Burning Car[info]credulesque on June 2nd, 2008 04:08 pm (UTC)
Jensen swallowed and nearly tripped over the step, falling into Jared's arms. He straightened himself quickly and muttered something about having weak knees from too little breakfast. "Don't do that again or I'll end up in hospital!"

PAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....silly Jensen *giggles*
It's a bit creepy that Jared was that open with his mum, god I would never tell me mum ANYTHING like that! But it's hilarious at the same time.
I totally think you should write a sequel but it kinda depends where you're gonna leave this? Doesn't it. I have no idea how this verse is gonna end but when it does end I'll let you know.
Great chapter
=D
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
Don't laugh at Jensen! Did you never tripped because the person next to you said something unbelieveable? Believe me, I did! Sherri is a lot like my Mum, who really is this open about everything... I don't know anything different!
Thanks so much commenting!
We've great ideas for the sequel... you'll see! *kisses*
blackpanther07[info]blackpanther07 on June 2nd, 2008 04:15 pm (UTC)
OMG I'm so glad to see this update, Jareds a bitter! I can totally see that. and the syrup, gods! and Jared telling his mom that he's going to give Jensen a blow job that was great, she is deff a very cool mom. This is great. Sequel?...DEFFINANTLY!
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 06:04 pm (UTC)
*yay for biting!Jared*
The syrup... *eyes bottle in fridge* things you can do with this stuff *naughty grin*

Thanks so much for commenting!!! *kisses*
misutaki[info]misutaki on June 2nd, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
i need swim team recognizing the marks... like now.. lol you guys can write people very convincingly and i just wanna see that... this chapter was great.. maybe the best so far? i dunno :P more please! :)
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 08:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much!! Be patient... we'll get there... ;)!
aww, we love getting compliments... *kisses*
spooky2_alex: Sexy[info]spooky2_alex on June 2nd, 2008 08:25 pm (UTC)
ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! OMG, they're so so cute. I loved them. And Jared so sweet... I wanna read their first time it'll so cute&sexy&hot&sweet... Sure ;-)
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks... so glad you like it!!! *kisses*
We'll update soon!
Skywalker-Winchester: Texas Boys Iconaddict[info]anakin415 on June 2nd, 2008 08:26 pm (UTC)
"Holy shit! Jared's a biter?!"

TOM FTW!!!!! that rocked
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 08:46 pm (UTC)
lol!!! thanks.... love your icon!!!
Lena[info]alena2b on June 2nd, 2008 08:38 pm (UTC)
awesome chapter! i love how they are relaxing into each other. they are adorable..
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 2nd, 2008 08:48 pm (UTC)
Thanks... they really are so adorable!!! *kisses*
AbbySN_24lover: Made by Jensen_is_love[info]sn_24lover on June 2nd, 2008 09:32 pm (UTC)
I wait all weekend and you post while I'm at work. Damn!!! Sorry Greedy Bitch here. LOL
Ok this entire chapter was to cute for words, well except the Dad yelling part. Tom and Kenzie are total sweetness and Jensen and Jared are cuter than cute. Glad to see (most) everyone is happy now.

Looking forward to more.
alethea293: screwed[info]alethea293 on June 3rd, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
*pets Greedy Bitch*
Thanks so much... glad you like it!!!
More will be very soon ;)! *kisses*
sammy_dean_mi: pic#72977361[info]sammy_dean_mi on June 2nd, 2008 10:40 pm (UTC)
New chapter!*happy*
they're so cute, and Kenzie and Sherri are awesome :)
more soon.
*kisses*
alethea293: screwed[info]alethea293 on June 3rd, 2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Kenzie and Sherri rock!
More will be up really really soon
*happy kisses for you*
johnnyjosh[info]johnnyjosh on June 3rd, 2008 03:03 am (UTC)
Awesome update! ^^ The bedroom scene was very hot, and so many funny moments! I'm looking forward to seeing the family work things out a bit more. Great job once again.
alethea293[info]alethea293 on June 3rd, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Thanks!!!
We had to make it a bit lighter sincewe tortured them very long indeed... next chapter comes very soon!
*hugs*
TeTe: hfttponr?[info]maritx on June 3rd, 2008 04:22 am (UTC)
OMG!!
I have this bite kink since... EVUH!
And with Jared being a bitter you just made my night! I'm gonna have VERY sweet dreams!!
I think I love you! Both!
I miss you girl!!
Don't think I forgot about yourpromise! You still have to keep it! No matter how much porn you give me!!
Lol!!
Love you! Hope to talk soon!
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 3rd, 2008 07:32 am (UTC)
*snort* Thanks for all the support, babe! And I never break promises. But dude, You can't make fun of my british accent!
(no subject) - [info]maritx on June 3rd, 2008 10:00 pm (UTC)
fanofsuper[info]fanofsuper on June 3rd, 2008 04:40 am (UTC)
Another great chapter, It's unique to see Jensen as the one to be nervous about taking the relationship further & Jared being the one more in control & so confident.

I'm glad that we are finding out a little more about Jensen & Kenzie's mom & what impact her leaving had on the family. That still didn't give Alan the right to say what he did & I'm glad that everyone else stood up for the boys. Hope Alan will come around.

Looking forward to the next chapter & of course yes on the sequel. I would have asked for one even if you didn't have the poll
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 3rd, 2008 07:33 am (UTC)
Well we already had the last chapter written out last night, but we don't usually get as many reviews if we post it so soon. Due to a lot of people who skip commenting. *pout* But it should be up sometime today.
(no subject) - [info]fanofsuper on June 4th, 2008 02:02 am (UTC)
kuhekabir[info]kuhekabir on June 3rd, 2008 07:11 am (UTC)
That was great, loved it. Please post more soon :)
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 3rd, 2008 07:35 am (UTC)
*bounces* Thanks So much! Woman, when are we gonna write your idea? *excited*
ramona4jake[info]ramona4jake on June 3rd, 2008 07:11 am (UTC)
I thought the problems were over for them ! But I should've thought about Jensen's father....and the sex issue ??! Hmmm, bet Jared wont be able to wait ! ;)
Thank you, I so much love the way they act towards each other, and how loving Sherry and Kenzie are !
(Gem) -  It's That Jensen_is_love Feeling.[info]jensen_is_love on June 3rd, 2008 07:42 am (UTC)
Sherri and Kenzie are the official presidents of the gay club! haha!
cas_desespere[info]cas_desespere on June 3rd, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
Read the chap already yesterday on my mobile device and liked it a lot, even if I can't imaginge Jared shouting to his Mom about this blow job. ;)

I would wish for the ground to open an swallow me.

slash_freak_oz[info]slash_freak_oz on June 26th, 2008 02:53 am (UTC)
My fave parts...

"Holy shit! Jared's a biter?!" Tom exclaimed, eyes wide as he stared at the purpling marks. "Whoa!"

"I hate you." Jared muttered to Jensen, no real heat behind it. "I'm about to go give Jensen a blowjob, mom." Jared grinned, suddenly feeling brave and adventurous. "So if you hear any noises.."

There was a shattering sound from the kitchen, and Kenzie shot out of the living-room, arms packed with her presents.

"Jared... I just dropped the mug you made me in fifth grade, and now it's broken!" Sherri yelled and came out of the kitchen, standing beside Kenzie.

Jensen sat down on the stairs, he had to hold on to the wall to keep some balance while he shook with laughter.

"You fucker." Jared muttered to Jensen, nudging him. He dodged the playful whack that Sherri gave him for his language. "What?! It's not like I'm lying.. I am going to give him a blowjob!" He laughed, nodding towards Jensen's obvious hard-on with a smirk when he saw Jensen blush.

"I don't wanna hear any kind of noise coming from your rooms, okay?" Sherri scolded them, but she was already smiling again. She was just glad to see them both happy.


LOL nearly wet my pants from laughing to hard!!!
bloodyrosered[info]bloodyrosered on June 27th, 2008 01:08 am (UTC)

"I hate you." Jared muttered to Jensen, no real heat behind it. "I'm about to go give Jensen a blowjob, mom."

ROFL couldn't stop laught on this one!

But also I imagined a Jens all wet with sirop and...OK ziping my mouth oops fingers right now! Its 4:00 a.m. And I have to wake up in 7 but guess what going for next chapter :D
 
 

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